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Barbell Squats

Jacob Rogers

June 16, 2023

Abstract

Every year there are countless individuals that want to make a change in their health. One of the fist steps these individuals will take is joining a gym. One of the more complex lifts these newly gym members will encounter is the barbell squat. It requires certain technique and proper form in order avoid injury and complete the lift effectively.

Introduction

New gym members embarking on a journey to improve their health will eventually encounter the barbell squat exercise. The correct form and technique is crucial for you to learn so that no injury is acquired during the lift. The list below will allow you to perform the barbell squat exercise with confidence, and greatly reduce the risk for injury. The only required amount of skill in order to perform a proper squat is memorization of the steps, and then applying the steps into the squat exercise. An overview of the steps to initiate a proper barbell squat are proper clothing attire, proper weight loaded on the bar, good feet position, and finally the correct form when implementing the squat. The time frame will vary depending on how many squats you choose to do, but for one squat following these steps will be approximately two to three seconds long. It is recommended that you perform this exercise in a gym with the correct squat equipment that is provided.

Materials

Proper clothing attire is very important when performing this exercise. For men, an athletic t-shirt, along with spandex, athletic shorts, and flat surface shoes are recommended. For women the recommended clothing attire consist of sports bra, athletic shirt, spandex or leggings, and also flat surface shoes. The athletic clothing is less constricting and allows for greater mobility and increases the range of motion. The flat surface shoes will allow for a proper base so that you are stable when performing the exercise. Optional equipment is a weight belt. The weight belt allows for greater stability when performing the squat. The weights, squat rack, and barbell are all included in the gym.

Barbell Squat Steps

The list below is in order for you to memorize and to follow while doing the barbell squat. Remember to follow each step carefully and safely while doing this exercise.

1. Prepare yourself by dressing in the proper gym attire.

2. Go to the gym and secure a squat rack.

3. Grab lighter weighted plates and load onto squat bar.

4. Position bar evenly on the upper portion of your trapezius muscles as seen in ( Figure 1).

Figure 1.

The Barbell Front Squat Guide (for Building Muscle)

( Figure 1) Duquette, S., Marco Walker-Ng, Bhs., & Shane Duquette and Marco Walker-Ng, Bhs. (2023, May 22). The Barbell front squat guide (for building muscle). Outlift. https://outlift.com/front-squat-hypertrophy-guide/

Warning

Improper alignment of the bar can result in an imbalance of the weight, and can cause you to lose control of the weight.

5. Once properly positioned lift the bar off the rack.

6. Take one or two steps backwards.

7. Position feet shoulder width apart.

8. Begin to descend carefully, and with keeping your back flat as seen in (Figure 2).

Figure 2.

Squat 101: How To Do Properly and Common Mistakes 2 | Squats, Upper back  muscles, Squat workout

(Figure 2) Squat 101: How to do properly and common mistakes 2: Squats, upper back muscles, squat workout. Pinterest. (2022, December 8). https://www.pinterest.com/pin/squat-101-how-to-do-properly-and-common-mistakes-2–626704104413899706/

Warning

Bending too far can result in an overextension of the weight and may cause you to collapse forward.

9. Stop descension when quads are parallel with floor.

10. Once quads are parallel, begin upward movement by squeezing glutes, and allowing hips to move forward.

11. Finish squat with bar and shoulders in alignment with your hips.

12. Take one or two steps forward and rerack the bar back onto rack upon completion of exercise.

References

( Figure 1) Duquette, S., Marco Walker-Ng, Bhs., & Shane Duquette and Marco Walker-Ng, Bhs. (2023, May 22). The Barbell front squat guide (for building muscle). Outlift. https://outlift.com/front-squat-hypertrophy-guide/

(Figure 2) Squat 101: How to do properly and common mistakes 2: Squats, upper back muscles, squat workout. Pinterest. (2022, December 8). https://www.pinterest.com/pin/squat-101-how-to-do-properly-and-common-mistakes-2–626704104413899706/

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This will be an instruction guide for medical personnel, with a basic knowledge of anatomy and physiology, and the allowed scope of practice to insert an intravenous(iv) line in an adult patient using aseptic techniques. IV lines can be placed for fluid resuscitation, medication routes, and even blood products. This will be a 19-step guide to IV insertion that will take only a few minutes to complete. This task will ideally be completed in a clean, medical facility, however, can be used in a combat environment. Extra steps will just need to be taken to clean the environment.

HOW TO INSERT INTRAVENOUS(IV) LINE

Materials required:

1 IV kit that includes:

1- 18 or 20G IV Catheter needle

1- Constricting band or tourniquet

1- 5 to 10mL Saline flush

1- Transparent film dressing

1- Alcohol or chlorhexidine prep

1- Saline lock

1- 2×2 gauze

1 IV line

1 IV bag

1 pair of nitrile gloves

1 2-in tape roll

1 Chux or absorbent pad

Figure 1. IV Kit displayed that can be ordered by hospitals (Chinook Medical, 2023).

INSTRUCTIONS

1. First start by gathering and prepping your equipment and taking body safety precautions. Lay down the Chux pad to place all materials on and underneath the patient’s arm to absorb any possible fluid or blood. Perform handwashing techniques and don nitrile gloves. Make sure that you have all the necessary materials in your reach, as once you start, you will be unable to walk away and be mostly one-handed. Be sure to prep the IV line by puncturing the bag and letting the fluid flow to the end of the line to remove all air bubbles.

2. Locate the IV site.

Note: For beginners, it is usual to first look at the Antecubital Fossa as the veins are usually more pronounced and have easier access. You can mark the site by pressing down on the skin with a cap or with a skin marker. Diagram  Description automatically generated

Figure 2, Common veins in arm used for venipuncture (proceduralist, n.d.)

3. Once you have the site located you will place the tourniquet 2-3 inches above the desired site.

4. Disinfect the site using the disinfectant given in the kit. Use a pinwheel motion, starting in the middle and circling out for 30 seconds.

5. Once the disinfectant has dried stabilize the vein by pulling the skin taut with your non-dominant hand.

6. Hold the IV needle in your dominant hand with your thumb and index finger, using your other three fingers to stabilize your hand on the patient’s arm.

Caution: Remember needle safety when removing the cap before insertion and sharps protocol.

7. Insert the needle bevel up at an approximate 20–30-degree angle into the desired site.

8. Pierce the skin and insert until blood is seen in the flashback chamber.

9. Once you have seen blood in the chamber, lower the needle 10-15 degrees and advance approx. 1/8 of an inch further into the vein.

10. Thread the catheter into the vein and off the needle until the hub reaches the skin, DO NOT remove the needle.

11. Release the constricting band.

12. Apply pressure with your non-dominant hand slightly above the site to occlude blood flow out and remove the needle.

Note: There may be blood that leaks out and that is okay just make sure to clean it.

13. Attach the saline lock to the catheter hub.

14. Secure with the transparent film dressing

15. Attach the flush syringe.

16. Check for blood return by pulling back on the syringe and if there is then continue to flush 5ccs of the sterile saline into the site. While flushing check for infiltration that can be seen with bubbling around the site, redness, and the patient might feel pain.

Caution: It is important to identify infiltration ASAP and remove the IV as leaving it can cause further damage to the patient

17. Attach the prepped IV line and IV bag to the saline lock and hang the bag on an IV pole or appropriate holding apparatus above the patient and select the desired flow rate.

18. Secure the line to the patient’s hand or wrist with the 2-in tape so that it does not come out as they move.

19. Finally, dispose of everything in the correct receptacle, clean your space, and the task is complete.

References

IV Start Kit with Catheter, 18Ga. (2023). Chinook Medical Gear Inc. Retrieved June 14, 2023, from https://www.chinookmed.com/020210/iv-start-kit-with-catheter-18ga.

Veins in arm. (n.d.). POCUS Pro and Proceduralist.org. Retrieved June 14, 2023, from https://proceduralist.org/us-guided-iv/us-iv-technique/.

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