Please help me reword these three paragraphs while also keeping the words, pathos, logos, and ethos the same. And also keep the words that are quoted the same. Thank you!
Please try and reword it as much as you can but also make it have the same meaning as before.
The paragraphs:
Kaling succeeded in her goal by convincing her audience through the use of pathos that life after graduation doesn’t have to be scary when you have an exceptional amount of confidence in yourself even if it’s not real. Graduating from college and entering the real world can be frightening. Too many times there will be people who will doubt your abilities or put fears in your heads that you can’t do certain things. Many days they will take you for granted, down played, mistreated but that should not consume you. When you have been multiple times that you can’t do something a part of you starts to believe it. So hearing her say “Don’t let anyone tell you that you can’t do something, but especially not yourself” is comforting for her audiences. We live in a world where everything is posted on social media and everyone gets criticized one way or the other so self-confidence can go a long way.
Kaling fulfills her goal of convincing her audiences through logos that life after college is not as scary as many may think when people do “better jobs of supporting each other and working together” instead of competing with one another, especially women. We live in an era where women are still fighting for equal pay as men for the same positions. Rather than being at each other’s throats, “Wouldn’t it be better if we worked together to dismantle a system that makes it seems like there’s limited room for us?” She made her audience understand that anything can be accomplished by working together. We all know the saying “teamwork makes a dream” that is exactly what Kaling did in her movie “Ocean’s 8, when Kaling and seven other women working together to steal the world’s most expensive diamond necklace for the Met Gala”.
Kaling attains her goal of convincing the graduating class of 2018 through an ethos that it’s okay to not have a plan and even if you do it’s okay if it does not go in the order you had planned. Life is difficult as it is and we as humans tend to put pressure on ourselves to be perfect; however, it’s okay not to be. She talked about how she made some plans for herself after graduating from Dartmouth College and how they did not go according to plan. “So I just want to tell you guys, don’t be scared if you don’t do things in the right order, or if you don’t do some things at all. I didn’t think I’d have a child before I got married, but hey, it turned out that way”.
